tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post2503482875560669365..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.632+01:00Comments on PEOPLE DON'T EAT ENOUGH FUDGE: “Sail away with me honey”Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-22577287984660828942011-07-16T08:54:15.831+01:002011-07-16T08:54:15.831+01:00You and me both E :)
The truth is she's proba...You and me both E :)<br /><br />The truth is she's probably both.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-15300163110181762862011-07-16T02:02:29.521+01:002011-07-16T02:02:29.521+01:00I really like this one. I liked the emotion and th...I really like this one. I liked the emotion and the descriptions. I thought she was sending him away to get on with her life. Then you wrote in the comments that she could ask him to stay. So now I feel conflicted. :( I thought she was strong. After reading I think she is stubborn.<br /><br />Yes, I over think things. :)E.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04660326954591560370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-86728052715744481942011-07-14T10:42:46.639+01:002011-07-14T10:42:46.639+01:00Thank you Sif, I'm glad you liked it.Thank you Sif, I'm glad you liked it.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-89727914007237018242011-07-14T01:18:08.950+01:002011-07-14T01:18:08.950+01:00Great tension in this scene! I love that you showe...Great tension in this scene! I love that you showed how they were feeling through details like the loosening of the fingers and the tremor in the his voice.No onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516581267618212776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-45842662515453749082011-07-13T11:51:35.441+01:002011-07-13T11:51:35.441+01:00Thank you Jodie. Like most of the things I write t...Thank you Jodie. Like most of the things I write there is a personal element. I know how one of the characters felt but I can really only guess at the other.<br /><br />It is sad Megan, writing it and reading it makes me pretty sad at the waste. Life is too short to be afraid to love.<br /><br />You could be right Naomi I hadn't thought of that. In which case it could be the opening chapter couldn't it?<br /><br />I think we've all been there Jennifer, so many things left unsaid. I don't plan on doing that anymore. Who knows, the right words could make the difference and you would always wonder if they might have if you didn't have the courage.<br /><br />Thank you LWM, it is a bit straight in the deep end and definitely sentimental which is making me think that it really should be the opening chapter were it to go anywhere. I'd need to temper the tendency towards Mills and Boon just a little while hopefully keeping the real emotion.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-5442471283998175792011-07-13T06:27:32.823+01:002011-07-13T06:27:32.823+01:00I like the emotion you so quickly established. I&#...I like the emotion you so quickly established. I'm a sucker for lots of lovely sentiment.life without mathematicshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04115727837229182798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-57170834371410351042011-07-13T05:29:50.505+01:002011-07-13T05:29:50.505+01:00I liked the detail of lip between his teeth too. I...I liked the detail of lip between his teeth too. I also liked the struggle between wanting to say something, but not being able to.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-66037681541837644732011-07-13T04:54:07.057+01:002011-07-13T04:54:07.057+01:00I love the detail of him biting his bottom lip.
...I love the detail of him biting his bottom lip. <br />I could feel the tension as I read too.<br /><br />I'd thought I wanted to know why she was leaving... but then again I think it is better that this is not said. Makes the piece more alluring! <br /><br />Wel done.Naomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944798399375789864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-17072084544720915192011-07-13T01:29:14.294+01:002011-07-13T01:29:14.294+01:00Oh that's so sad :(
Lovely piece though!Oh that's so sad :(<br /><br />Lovely piece though!Megan Blandfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12932508388869573748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-71085648599633606362011-07-13T00:15:23.832+01:002011-07-13T00:15:23.832+01:00Ooh, I liked this. Could feel the emotion of both ...Ooh, I liked this. Could feel the emotion of both characters. <br /><br />Fab.Jodie Anstedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12300961546795965857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-26561995216415748152011-07-12T17:50:23.825+01:002011-07-12T17:50:23.825+01:00I guess I could have reversed the roles Lou and re...I guess I could have reversed the roles Lou and referred to Eva version (which is beautiful) couldn't I ;-)<br /><br />I think that if I were to write the full story that may well be the final chapter. I'd like to think it wasn't but I don't know, even if he couldn't stop loving her could he ever trust her again when she didn't have faith in him?Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-12651603281213209052011-07-12T15:48:04.776+01:002011-07-12T15:48:04.776+01:00Love the lyrics Sarah, but I read then and hear Ev...Love the lyrics Sarah, but I read then and hear Eva Cassidy in my head not David Grey, but then I always have liked to be different!<br /><br />Lovely writing too - you definitely leave us wanting to read more!<br /><br />Lou :-) xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-70955919159216019702011-07-12T01:55:07.018+01:002011-07-12T01:55:07.018+01:00Thank you Gill.
She didn't have to let him go...Thank you Gill.<br /><br />She didn't have to let him go, all she needed to do was to ask him to stay.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-64683299644821134222011-07-12T01:14:48.202+01:002011-07-12T01:14:48.202+01:00I like the first paragraph, that she knew he would...I like the first paragraph, that she knew he would have his bottom lip between his teeth. A nice detail. <br /><br />I wonder why she has to let him go?<br /><br />Thanks again for joining in with W.o.W!<br /><br />xInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-72200970478849779502011-07-12T00:58:31.198+01:002011-07-12T00:58:31.198+01:00This particular scene, just this time Janelle.
I&...This particular scene, just this time Janelle.<br /><br />I've always loved the song even though it is about heartache and feeling powerless.<br /><br />Its a haunting tune with beautiful lyrics.<br /><br />I like to believe that if the person it was meant for heard it then maybe they would sail away together (if only metaphorically)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-5471759600668487442011-07-12T00:21:44.958+01:002011-07-12T00:21:44.958+01:00Gorgeous! Seeing as this was inspired by your favo...Gorgeous! Seeing as this was inspired by your favourite song, is this kind of scene something you have imagined before when listening to the song, or just this time?Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-28079704875125265132011-07-11T13:44:59.284+01:002011-07-11T13:44:59.284+01:00Visiting via WoW.
Ooh a bit of romance.Visiting via WoW.<br />Ooh a bit of romance.Kristy Prowsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01955912299442971932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-43900053936598695782011-07-11T12:38:14.278+01:002011-07-11T12:38:14.278+01:00goosebumps!!goosebumps!!Gemma @ My Big Nutshellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07251131676081523546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-77703791635753585952011-07-11T10:59:09.757+01:002011-07-11T10:59:09.757+01:00I liked the lyric as well as the scene that has be...I liked the lyric as well as the scene that has been picturized through this week's exercise. <br /><br />Keep up the good work. I look forward to read such nice piece again next week.Sanchyeta Srivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13174445319179490226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-2155810607256668542011-07-11T09:35:03.646+01:002011-07-11T09:35:03.646+01:00Lovely lyrics and a nice exercise Sarah :)
Could ...Lovely lyrics and a nice exercise Sarah :)<br /><br />Could you please read this blogpost and leave a comment if you could spare a few moments..Thanks in advance<br /><br />http://anxstrestime.blogspot.com/2011/07/amazing-world-of-blogging.htmlRukmani Krishnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00927732550232361654noreply@blogger.com