tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post3494340625436187095..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.632+01:00Comments on PEOPLE DON'T EAT ENOUGH FUDGE: Five Sentence Fiction - EmptySarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-20958707935595866972013-03-06T09:14:23.688+00:002013-03-06T09:14:23.688+00:00Thank you KRS - it's good to remember isn'...Thank you KRS - it's good to remember isn't it?<br /><br />Thanks Cher :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-35145493754053134022013-03-06T02:08:01.279+00:002013-03-06T02:08:01.279+00:00:) Love the scene set here. Great job.:) Love the scene set here. Great job.Cher Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817089871390887197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-60216157106378787662013-03-06T01:57:07.994+00:002013-03-06T01:57:07.994+00:00You can feel a lot of the scene here - the colors,...You can feel a lot of the scene here - the colors, smells, and sounds. Very descriptive without being obvious. Nice story!<br /><br />And it reminds me of my one grandmother who always had blackberry preserves around... K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-8749638152704711652013-03-05T20:14:19.397+00:002013-03-05T20:14:19.397+00:00Thank you for your lovely comment Mary.Thank you for your lovely comment Mary.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-6817148089578437342013-03-05T18:28:09.931+00:002013-03-05T18:28:09.931+00:00What a beautiful tale, well told and so nice to se...What a beautiful tale, well told and so nice to see an entry that has a feel good theme for the prompt word. I loved this, thanks for sharingMary T Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03265429691200918119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-52424516701693134892013-03-05T08:58:01.048+00:002013-03-05T08:58:01.048+00:00Thank you JzB :)Thank you JzB :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-40214690969045460102013-03-05T01:48:57.680+00:002013-03-05T01:48:57.680+00:00You've shown (not told) a sweet memory. one t...You've shown (not told) a sweet memory. one that would be sweet, even without the sugar.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-42037367373733965652013-03-04T13:33:02.672+00:002013-03-04T13:33:02.672+00:00Thank you Kate :)Thank you Kate :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-88249473949157296212013-03-04T09:52:06.333+00:002013-03-04T09:52:06.333+00:00Really nice flow to this and such a tender image t...Really nice flow to this and such a tender image that you wanted to smell the aromas too, great!kate nhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343201276177843047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-35779304960579134972013-03-04T08:22:18.330+00:002013-03-04T08:22:18.330+00:00It's been so cold here too Angela and remember...It's been so cold here too Angela and remembering warmed me inside and out too. :)<br /><br />Thank you Lillie - that's how it was for me too.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-74214179455690789582013-03-03T23:49:39.068+00:002013-03-03T23:49:39.068+00:00I love the imagery in these sentences. I felt that...I love the imagery in these sentences. I felt that that little girl again, sitting in my own grandmother's kitchen knowing there would always be more goodies to eat :) Awesome!!Lillie Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00540271318995592439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-7500408069276331882013-03-03T18:48:44.481+00:002013-03-03T18:48:44.481+00:00Funny....it's below freezing outside (and not ...Funny....it's below freezing outside (and not much warmer in the house, feels like), and yet this story warmed me right up! That's some beautifully strong imagery - the smells, the warmth, the sounds and silence --- gorgeous work!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05145626477713347271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-7233521509784169212013-03-03T10:54:06.878+00:002013-03-03T10:54:06.878+00:00The smell of fresh mint always takes me right back...The smell of fresh mint always takes me right back to a good place Lisa :)<br /><br />Thank you Jayne.<br /><br />It's a good place to spend some time isn't it Lauren?<br /><br />Thank you Josie - wouldn't it be nice to stay there forever?<br /><br />Thank you Lizzie - empty is usually negative but this was the story that came to mind as soon as I read the prompt.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-21941456327246010212013-03-03T01:47:58.916+00:002013-03-03T01:47:58.916+00:00Brought back memories of my grandparents. Beautifu...Brought back memories of my grandparents. Beautiful imagery and well written. I love the positiveness take on the prompt at the end. x Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-33809226913748838622013-03-03T01:09:19.311+00:002013-03-03T01:09:19.311+00:00Wonderful, sentimental piece, and good food so oft...Wonderful, sentimental piece, and good food so often ties into that! Cooking and a grandmother's love, a beautiful sunny day, it just doesn't get better than this! If only we never had to grow up and live in the big cold world. Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-149968160421991432013-03-02T23:34:19.162+00:002013-03-02T23:34:19.162+00:00Your story evokes so many relatable memories. It b...Your story evokes so many relatable memories. It brought me back to my grandmother's kitchen.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01403714167201265834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-71016241976828140222013-03-02T22:01:06.910+00:002013-03-02T22:01:06.910+00:00What a lovely, sweet story. I really like the poi...What a lovely, sweet story. I really like the point of view of the child. Excellent!injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-2142175167207568722013-03-02T21:57:14.848+00:002013-03-02T21:57:14.848+00:00Really enjoyed that, brought back memories of crus...Really enjoyed that, brought back memories of crushing mint in my fingers and hot afternoons in the garden. My grandparents grew sweetcorn which we hid amongst and we stole apples from their apple tree!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-51156294999333341382013-03-02T10:29:20.231+00:002013-03-02T10:29:20.231+00:00Thank you Ann - some part of my childhood had a si...Thank you Ann - some part of my childhood had a simplicity that was magical.<br /><br />Thank you Robin - I could wish that every child (my own included) could have the memories I'm so lucky to have.<br /><br />Thanks PP - that's exactly how I wanted it to make you feel, it's how I remember feeling :) xx<br /><br />Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-80492234281980145412013-03-02T08:18:49.608+00:002013-03-02T08:18:49.608+00:00Gosh
what a treat for the senses, with wriggly to...Gosh<br /><br />what a treat for the senses, with wriggly toes and smells and sounds. I can feel the heat from here and feel all relaxed and homely xxpamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12219309064660143026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-64423168519255292222013-03-01T13:24:18.720+00:002013-03-01T13:24:18.720+00:00Sarah,
Loved your imagery. This is something I...Sarah, <br />Loved your imagery. This is something I'd loved to have experienced but I never did/could as I've lived in the NYC area all my life, and never knew any of my grandparents.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-37927944411350215912013-03-01T06:18:31.909+00:002013-03-01T06:18:31.909+00:00I love this homespun tale. Very nice.
I am a new f...I love this homespun tale. Very nice.<br />I am a new follower! Hope you may join me, too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com