tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post3352623648267858134..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.632+01:00Comments on PEOPLE DON'T EAT ENOUGH FUDGE: Songbird - Write on WednesdaySarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-10594988234748844572011-10-02T20:33:19.703+01:002011-10-02T20:33:19.703+01:00Thank you AS :)
Thanks Gill I'm really glad y...Thank you AS :)<br /><br />Thanks Gill I'm really glad you think so. Maybe it's a little of both ....Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-24849924302845832712011-10-02T15:04:44.131+01:002011-10-02T15:04:44.131+01:00I feel like I have seen (read?) you getting better...I feel like I have seen (read?) you getting better and better each week. Sarah. Is it confidence? Practice? Whatever, it's great to see! I loved the image of the cookie cutter garden beds, I got such a strong image in my head from these words. Awesome work!InkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-91854795767639016332011-10-02T12:48:08.608+01:002011-10-02T12:48:08.608+01:00Lots of really good turns of phrase - 'a suspi...Lots of really good turns of phrase - 'a suspicion of a curl'. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-58382147308828337192011-09-30T18:02:42.861+01:002011-09-30T18:02:42.861+01:00Thanks Lene. Maybe Rock Chick needs to believe sh...Thanks Lene. Maybe Rock Chick needs to believe she deserves a happy ending first.<br /><br />Thank you Tiffiny, I've still got questions myself, I don't know where or how this ends :)<br /><br />Thanks Naomi, with real love all things are possible.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-75012845630627261822011-09-30T08:21:02.500+01:002011-09-30T08:21:02.500+01:00Really nicely written. The way you have written it...Really nicely written. The way you have written it really draws me in as a reader. <br />I love the way you have ended it.. there is possibility in those last lines for love again.Naomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11944798399375789864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-58772979516909419892011-09-29T18:42:35.219+01:002011-09-29T18:42:35.219+01:00Very nice, your descriptions are wonderful, they r...Very nice, your descriptions are wonderful, they really pull you into the story. I also like how you left the questions to the mind of the reader at the end. Great writing.T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01541994660908618237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-25835077310434630302011-09-29T12:46:33.220+01:002011-09-29T12:46:33.220+01:00Gorgeously written Sarah. I do hope that they even...Gorgeously written Sarah. I do hope that they eventually get their happy ending. He sounds wonderful!Lenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-77194478779762242872011-09-28T11:47:28.613+01:002011-09-28T11:47:28.613+01:00Thank you Car.
He is, inside and out.
Who know...Thank you Car.<br /><br />He is, inside and out. <br /><br />Who knows, maybe she could have her happy ending with him. Maybe she needs to realise that before it's too late and she misses her chance forever.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-58837649132109132112011-09-28T11:06:34.924+01:002011-09-28T11:06:34.924+01:00Great work Sarah. He sounds like a gorgeous man an...Great work Sarah. He sounds like a gorgeous man and it's very sad that Rock Chick won't get her happy ending with him.Carhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17412323070595507627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-32431360307915175682011-09-27T17:56:34.172+01:002011-09-27T17:56:34.172+01:00Thanks Anne. Now that would be a challenge, introd...Thanks Anne. Now that would be a challenge, introducing someone elses character into your own story. Could be fun :) xSarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-79190930774942318692011-09-27T16:03:21.422+01:002011-09-27T16:03:21.422+01:00That was great Sarah. You really have a very natur...That was great Sarah. You really have a very natural style which makes the reader feel like it's them, one of the characters in the story. Well, that's how I feel. I think Rock Chick and Carla should get together some time and compare notes.<br /><br />Anne @ Domesblissity xxDomesblissityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07270409725826410919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-9711110339176880302011-09-27T08:21:31.563+01:002011-09-27T08:21:31.563+01:00It does Pam. Someone who's brave and prepared ...It does Pam. Someone who's brave and prepared to take a risk. Life's too damned short for what if's!<br /><br />The good thing about the postie is that you know he'll be back so I say, go for it! (although I was stalked by a postman for a while when I was 17:)<br /><br />Thank you Sheri, glad you liked it :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-84936398480367238352011-09-27T00:52:45.092+01:002011-09-27T00:52:45.092+01:00I really liked this. Felt like I was peering in to...I really liked this. Felt like I was peering in to such a special moment...warm and fuzzies...nice :)Sheri Bombhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220906981157426429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-88190316199026306022011-09-26T23:52:44.295+01:002011-09-26T23:52:44.295+01:00Chance meetings, need someone to be brave don'...Chance meetings, need someone to be brave don't they?<br /><br />I really enjoyed this Sarah, it flows beautifully. I'm wondering if I should have made more effort to engage the postie once he struck up a conversation ;)pamhttp://www.postcardpam.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-34475467010012384862011-09-26T22:06:36.613+01:002011-09-26T22:06:36.613+01:00Thanks KD. I really liked yours (even more when Id...Thanks KD. I really liked yours (even more when Id read the intro doh ;). I've also overshot the word count again whereas you told your story really well in much fewer words.<br /><br />Thank you Stephanie :) Like all the Rock Chick stories, it's based on real life which makes it easier. the park, the ducks, the cafe, all exist and the story is fairly true to real life too.<br /><br />Hmm, people to fully understand Kate I'd have to give the other side of the story. Funnily enough, I did write that post first but then decided to go with this view. What happens next? Your guess is as good as mine .... but I can't see a happy ever after somehow.<br /><br />Thanks TV, She is torn between knowing how lucky she is to have someone like him wanting to be a part of her life and not wanting to hurt him again. <br /><br />It just seems inevitable to her that she will if she lets him get close again so she holds back emotionally and physically and that hurts him too.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-47833605948777014002011-09-26T21:37:47.192+01:002011-09-26T21:37:47.192+01:00This was fantastic! I love the character's tor...This was fantastic! I love the character's torments and the male character was brilliant as well.<br /><br />Funny how you ended it with a look into the future, I did that in mine as well. I guess songs inspire that.<br />Oh and by 'funny' I mean you are obviously ingenious.TVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06553698737281809907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-25102683234845247702011-09-26T21:36:52.283+01:002011-09-26T21:36:52.283+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.TVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06553698737281809907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-2039075542331976702011-09-26T21:35:58.266+01:002011-09-26T21:35:58.266+01:00great physical and emotional descriptions, weaving...great physical and emotional descriptions, weaving in a sense of sadness and possibility, i want to know what happens next and why she is damaged..<br />Katespring days, new growthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809670414388039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-85818557090172021562011-09-26T20:14:50.867+01:002011-09-26T20:14:50.867+01:00Lovely writing! You did a nice job with describing...Lovely writing! You did a nice job with describing the scene. The story flows very well. <br />Great job!! :)Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1803854391640222787.post-15186500428652672282011-09-26T17:50:09.426+01:002011-09-26T17:50:09.426+01:00I like this one. So much better than the one I did...I like this one. So much better than the one I did :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006064321712054noreply@blogger.com