My second stab at this weeks WoW although I'm not sure it really counts as Romance.
"I can't stress how important it is that we behead this fiend.
A collective wince swept the room as, to a man, they crossed their legs.
Moments earlier there had been light hearted banter, nudging and winking, ‘well, WOULD you’??
Apart from the few serious boffins at the front intent on discussing the medical, ethical and of course religious connotations the general consensus had been ‘NO WAY JOSE!’
As an opening line it possibly was a little harsh she acknowledged. But hey, they were big boys (or so they would lead you to believe) and frankly she really wasn’t in the mood to humour them.
Enough time had been spent in this mans world for her to appreciate that the only way to survive was to hit ‘em hard and keep ‘em down.
Besides, it gave her a certain amount of quiet amusement.
For all their bluff and bluster. All their sidelong looks. All the comments made just loud enough for her to hear. They needed reminding from time to time that this was HER platform, her area of expertise.
They needed to understand, you didn’t have to own the pony to know how to ride it.
Sarah
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely fab.....there is nothing more I can say except can you write more...magic titbit!
Lou :-) x
Blimey Lou, I'm not sure! What I said about writing from personal experience ....... hmmm, maybe not this time. (I am so glad my Mum doesn't read this:)x
ReplyDeleteI agree - you have the hook!
ReplyDeleteHanging to know what happens next, lol.
You've set up a great heroine here - woman in a man's world, staking a claim, is always a great hook.
ReplyDeleteYup. I'm with the others. Would love to know what comes next! Fab.
ReplyDeleteThanks MM, I'm not really sure WHAT happens next. Maybe I'll revisit and see what happens.
ReplyDeleteThanks Allison, the kind of woman I admire whist not being at all like that myself :)
Thank you Jodie, I will work on this and see if I really do have a story in me.
This is great, I love this heroine. And I love, love, love the term 'boffin', brilliant!
ReplyDeleteHey Sarah, here you have really showed that a woman's thought and her work can go far beyond anyone can imagine in this man's world.
ReplyDeleteGood work and keep writing.